Speaking of Queries
Posted By Karen on December 8, 2009
I read an article in the October 2009 Writer’s Digest about queries. It was in the section Ask the Pro by Kara Gebhart Uhl. Asking the question: Best query received, the interviewee, Jessica Faust, co-founder of Bookends Literary Agency, states:
“The best queries don’t leave much of an impression at all. The key to a query isn’t so much in the parts – the specific paragraphs or information—but how well the author’s voice comes through.”
Ms. Fuast goes on to explain that, “the queries that really grab me are those that make me feel like I’m already in the book…”
I kind of like this idea of viewing the query as a whole instead of separate parts. But, you also need for it to be effective, as mentioned above it does need to grab the agent or editor. This means the nuts and bolts of your amazing story needs to come across on that one page document. Ah…this is where tight writing comes in handy.
I’ve heard a number of times to write a one sentence description of your manuscript or book. This helps you to find only those essential words that convey the essence of your work. I have done this and it takes time to accomplish, but once it’s done, you can expand upon it and create a paragraph or more. Try to limit the space used for the book description – your hook; don’t use the entire page for it because you will also usually need to include your marketing plan/s. Many more publishers expect and need the author to promote their own book.
It can all be confusing and troublesome as different agents and publishers each want something different from the author. So, what’s a writer to do?
Well, that’s not an easy question, but the best answer is to do your research. Usually publishers and agents have their submission guidelines posted on their websites. Read those instructions carefully – a rejection is waiting on the sidelines if you don’t follow the guidelines.
And, be sure to be professional in all aspects of your dealings with an agent or publisher. While each publisher or agent may expect something different from their potential clients, writing and publishing is a business like any other. So, do your best to come across as a professional. Part of that would mean not to mention your children, your mom or dad, or any other relatives in your query. Unless, your relative is a superstar, then it might be a plus! Oh, and be sure to proofread and edit your query before you send it off.
There are a number of articles that provide information about writing queries, just do a search.
Karen
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